Doujinshi 01.58
Saturday, September 6th, 2008 at 8:54 amSomeone really is having an Alucard moment today.
Btw, even though this doujin is basically play for me, critique is welcome, particularly anything specific to comics — layout, text, panel flow, camera angle, use of closeups, sound effects, backgrounds, depicting motion; anything at all. Or if you know a tutorial that you think I should read, or pictures I should look at, please send the link. The only thing germane to comics that I’m not trying to pay attention to at all is consistency in style, because I want to try different methods of drawing. And general art crit is also welcome; I think (hope?) I’ve improved to the point where you wouldn’t be wasting your breath.This isn’t a demand for advice, just saying don’t hold back if you have it (and have time, of course).
September 6th, 2008 at 9:27 am
AHAHA!
I can offer nothing constructive, too busy lovin’ on Alugwynn.
September 6th, 2008 at 11:23 am
Eh, lovin’ is also welcome. Alugwynn is lovin’ right back at ya. XD
September 6th, 2008 at 11:44 am
I do have some some negitive feed back. In the grring panel, i think the suggestion that he has eye sockets would have helped. He just looks like a eyeless choppy thing.
September 6th, 2008 at 11:57 am
I think you’re right. I’ll try some shade in that area next time. Thanks.
September 7th, 2008 at 1:23 pm
AHAHAHA O GOD ALUGWYNN ILU ♥
September 7th, 2008 at 5:38 pm
This episode of Ecchi no City was brought to you by the imaginary numbers 6i and 7i and by the vampire number 1435!
(Vampire numbers)